Thursday, October 21, 2010

Poetry Swap Using 3 Words

Another Poetry Swap.

We must use these words in a poem form.

The three words were: Falter, blurred, breath.

Here is my entry:


He took her breath away

His handsomeness blurred her vision

Should she falter and forget his past?

Yes, loving him was all she had.

1 comment:

  1. I don't know anything about the poetry swap, but I think I could write a short poem using those words:
    As my mother's heart beats faltered
    my vision became blurred with tears.
    I laid my hand upon her chest, and with the
    last breath she took along with it, my fears.